
पावों में हैं बेड़ियाँ
हाथों में है पाश
मैं खड़ा जमीं पे
पर, दृष्टि में आकाश
सुविधाएँ तो थी नहीं
साधन भी मुझे मिला नहीं
दर-दर की ठोकरे खायीं
पर, किसी से कोई गिला नहीं
सब कहते हैं, भाग्य में हो जितना
केवल, उतना ही तो मिलता है
पर करें क्या कि, जिद्दी है मन मेरा जो कहता
पुरुषार्थ भाग्य बदलता है
……अभय ……
A lovely painful poem!! Last line gave a whole new meaning to live life overall again in order to change destiny!!
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I tried to encapsulate both agony and optimism in few lines..Thanks so much for reading it!
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Definitely the poem depicts both feelings and it was really beautiful piece
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Thanks once again Tanvir! I am happy that you liked it.
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painful but true.. ☺️ nice..
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Thanks Panchali for reading and appreciating.
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mah pleasure…
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🙂
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Awesome!! Agree with the thought…purusharth bhagya badalta hai !
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Thank You!!!
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Thought provoking…
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Thanks Indira Ji!
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Beautiful poetry. Loved it.
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Thanks Yagnesh Ji!!!
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Bahut amazing kavita👏
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Bahut bahut Thank You!!! 🙂
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दर्द को दर्शाती आपकी कविता दिल को छूती हुई। वाकई जिन हाथों को कलम मिलना चाहिए उन्हें जिंदगी से जंग करना पड़ता है उनके बारे में जितना भी लिखा जाए कम है।ये सच है कि मजदूर देश के रीढ़ हैं मगर बाल मजदूरी अभिशाप।बहुत बढ़िया लिखा आपने।
पैरों में बेड़ियाँ,
हाथों में पाश,
हाय रे बिधाता,
क्या मेरा था पाप,
हाय रे बिधाता,
क्या मेरा था पाप।।
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शुक्रिया मधुसूदन जी, आपकी प्रतिक्रिया मेरी कृति को और भी बेहतर बनती है..वैसे बेहतर है कि नहीं ऐसा आपने ही कहा है 😛
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Jo padhega wahi kahega…..bahut badhiya hai👌👌👌
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☺️
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Very nice.
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Thank You Sir!!!
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One of the best
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Thanks Tanu!
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Hey!Longtime!I must admit your content quality has increased marvelously since I read your pieces last time,its amazing and very beautifully written…
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Hi Shivee! Where have you been these days? Since you have visited after so long that’s why you are finding interesting 😊
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Yeah,I have been quite busy, I really liked this piece though😊
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बहुत सही ,पुरुषार्थ से भाग्य बदलता है।
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शुक्रिया रेखा जी!
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अभय ,
तुम्हारी लेखनी रचनात्मक है
अभिनन्दन !!!!!
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शुक्रिया राजेश जी ..
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बहुत खूब। सच के बहुत ही करीब है आपकी रचना। 👌
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शुक्रिया!
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Beautifully expressed.! 😊
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Thanks for the appreciation☺️
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Bittersweet, loved reading it 💕
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Thanks so much Batwoman! Happy that you liked it. 😊
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