संग आज नहीं हो तुम मेरे
ये कैसी होनी है?
मिठास नहीं है मुख में मेरे
कलाई भी सूनी है!
उदास मन से मैंने उसे
वीडियो कॉल लगाया
राखी पर घर में न होने की
अंतर्व्यथा बताया
सोचा था मन की व्यथा
उधर भी वैसी ही होगी
मेरी अनुपस्थिति तो शायद
उसे भी खूब खली होगी
पर शैतानी हँसी देख
मैं भौचक्का रह गया
राखी के अवसर पर डिमांड सुनकर
मैं हक्का-बक्का हो गया
कहा उसने
“तुम हो कहीं भी, अमेज़न पर मेरे लिए
आज ही iPhone X आर्डर कर देना
और हो सके तो मेरी तरफ से
कलाई पर, एक राखी बांध लेना”
मैंने मन में सोचा
“क्या घोर कलयुग
इतनी जल्दी ही आ गया
भाई बहन के दिव्य रिश्ते को
भौतिक iPhone X खा गया !!!
😂😂😂
………अभय…….
क्यों भाईयों, क्या आपके संग भी ऐसा ही हुआ..और बहनों अपने कुछ ऐसा ही किया …….
Nice poetry. Relationship is becoming difficult in this digital age with tech savvy sisters.
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I second you. But I would like to broaden the scope of relationship which is becoming difficult in tech age. 🙂
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hahaha….soooooo true …..Indeed i can relate to it 🙂
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Bhai ka dard bhai hi jaan sakta hai… 😉 😀
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Exactly 😂😂
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😜
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I feel, when it’s the sister’s day then they have all the right to demand I phone X!😂
But anyway this is the best reality!
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Tell me a day which can be termed as Brother’s Day 😀
We are getting plundered on Rakhi and also on Bhai Dooj too…😂
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I must say that all other days are brother’s day where poor sisters have to take care of their mighty brothers!
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🙂
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आपको औऱ आपके परिवार को रक्षाबंधन की हार्दिक शुभकामनाएं
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Thank You
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Hahaha.. really funny.. Happy Raksha Bandhan dear!! 😊
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Thank You:-D
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Not only sisters,even brothers are getting demanding on this day.
That get me a new bat then tie your rakhi otherwise I have two more pyaari bhna..😂😂
Actually we are three sisters n one younger brother.😊😊
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Haha.. He outsmarted you! Well done champ.
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Always it happens..
Here I’m the victim. This post became salt to my wounds.😂😂😂😂
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I thought, having a humorous poem will heal many wounds…especially of Bhaiyas 😂
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Yeah ..Of only bhaiyas..
Nobody thinks about behnas😂😂
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Humor is gender neutral…Any one can enjoy until you take it personally😜
Waise bhi ye meri mangadhant rachna thi, meri koi sagi behan bhi nahi !!!!
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I appreciate your humour.. Really liked it.👌👌
And when it comes to these tantrums ,
I think what we earn is all for family only.
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True that!
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Bahut khub Abhay ji.
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Thanks Sagar!
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Welcome Abhay ji.
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Today festivals are losing its sanctity. Everything boils down to pomp and gifts.
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This was a fictional creation. Yet, I completely agree with your point.
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Oh, this was well written.
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Thank You!
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आज प्रत्येक पर्व अपनी पहचान खोते जा रहे हैं या यूँ कहें हम यथार्थ से दूर होते जा रहे हैं।खूबसूरत पोस्ट आज की सच्चाई को कमोवेश बयान करती हुई।
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Thanks for appreciation Madhu bhai..I just tried to create humor, but by seeing some of the comments I must say that my sarcasm has touched many raw nerves. 🙂
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यह तो समय समय की बात हैं. लेकिन मुझे लगता हैं बहन का हँसता चेहरा प्यारा ही लगा होगा . हाए फ़रमाइश महँगी ज़रूर हैं.
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Ji sahi kaha apne, par ye kavita meri kori parikalpana thi 😀
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😂😂 और बहन बेचारी यूँ हीं चर्चा में आ गई. आपको और आपकी बहन दोंनो को स्नेह .
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😀 Shukriya…Rakhi me sirf mithas khakar logo ka mann bhar jata hai… To nok jhok to banta hai
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I expect this isn’t a true story!
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Yes you are right! It’s a fictitious narrative! 🙂 Hope you have liked it.
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Lovely post
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Thanks!
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वाह आपकी कल्पना भी क्या खूब है 👌👌जो बहन रक्षा सूत्र बाँधने मात्र से खुश हो छोटे सगून में भी खुश हो खिल जाती है उसकी भी अगले साल बिना राखी बांधे महंगे तोफे की फरमाइशें की चाह होगी है न। कलयुग में कुछ भी हो सकता है कलयुगी भाई बात छुपाने के लिए बहन से ही महंगे गिफ्ट ले लेते हैं। हा हा हा हा। माफ कीजिएगा इसे हकीकत मत समझियेगा। थोड़ा सा हमने भी कलयुग में क्या हो सकता है कल्पना कर कमेन्ट किया है।
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He..he.. Ye bhi sahi hai. Shukriya ki aapne padha aur Saraha!
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well written , but u have to admit no rakhi is complete without the sister demanding something insanely expensive.
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Oh, yes. I do agree. It’s just a fiction!
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m guessing you r young , and to see a Hindi poem from a person your age fills me with great amount of happiness and envy .
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Haha.. I think it’s the thought process which decides the age…I studied in vernacular hence have liking towards Hindi and also it’s the language in which I am able to do justice with my emotions.
I request you to give expression to your envy,😅
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My first language is hindi and I wish I could write this well too. Although I have found a language that helps me express but Hindi poems get me instantly.
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Good to know! Keep visiting 🙂
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Haha 😀
Too good 🙏
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Wasn’t it ?😜
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Yes it is😀
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