हाँ मैं भी दौड़ में था ..
वही पुरानी अंधी दौड़
कभी मैं आगे तो कभी वो.
पहले कभी रुका नहीं
कभी सोचा नहीं
कैसी है ये दौड़
किस लिए ये दौड़
डर था कि
यदि रुकूंगा तो
पीछे तो न रह जाऊँगा
भागता रहा
अनायास अनवरत
पर जब आपने मुझे टोका
दौड़ने से रोका
तब जा के समझ आया
अरे! मैं तो उड़ सकता हूँ
नभ में असीम अन्नंत
…….अभय……
your thoughtful poetry is in itself a ‘Gyan.’ we work tirelessly for achieving for unset goals relentlessly and fall off the tree realising that a wasteful era ended finally. you deserve kudos for explaining this truth of life in lucid expression. congrats.
regards BRIJ KAUL.
You may forget me but not me .Ikeep hunting foryour posts.
read my latest poem THE CROWS ON THE SEA.
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Thank You Sir for ever encouraging words! I did not forget you Sir! My frequency has been slightly reduced. I am sorry.
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no matter. you are welcome and be blessed always.
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Very nice Abhay💐😊
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Thanks! And sorry for late response
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Really beautiful and thought provoking!!
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Thanks Kranti for reading and appreciating it!
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😊
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Nice post. Why do rat race, when you can fly.
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Shukriya Sir!
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बिल्कुल।शानदार पोस्ट। अब उड़ना ही है।👌👌
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Ji! bahut bahut dhanyavaad!
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Fabulous post
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Shukriya!
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Please read my first post
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Will visit!
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Well said Abhay ! social responsibilities and education system condition our minds to become a mediocre as you said, they make us run in the rat race.Though everyone has the potential to do extraordinary things (to fly). Am feeling motivated.
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Thanks Divya. I am very happy that it worked as a motivation for you!
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बहुत खूबसूरत अभिव्यक्ति है। 👌👌
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Dhanyavad Rajani Ji!
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Superb post 👌
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Thank you Bhawu😊
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