Did you ever feel, sometime, somethings similar has happened in past ? Didn’t you? 🙂
कभी कभी कोई बयार मुझे इस क़दर छू जाती है
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ऐसा लगता है कि मानो कहीं तुम कोई बहरूपिये तो नहीं
लबों पर मुस्कान मेरे आती हैं, शायद किसी की दुआ है
ऐसा लगता है कि मानो पहले भी कभी ,ऐसा ही कुछ हुआ है
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the ETERNAL tryst 
Some incidents, some odour, some colour, list is long…..yes, they can bring back past, nostalgia 🙂
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Oh yes! It’s endless…😊
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It happens… you’ve penned down that feeling so beautifully ‘लबों पर मुस्कान मेरे आती हैं, शायद किसी की दुआ है’… just wow!
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Thnks so much.
Actually, I was in hurry.
I feel it could have been better lyrically,
But since it came to me abruptly,
I penned down immediately (now the prose seems more lyrical😂) and by the way I feel emotions doesn’t always confirm the lyrics. Thanks for your views!
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Sometimes raw is more beautiful! Completely agree emotions needs to be felt 😊
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Some memories of the past are never to be forgotten.
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You simply can’t 😃
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गुमशुम हूँ पर ठीक हूँ,
मुस्कुराने से डरता हूँ,
अकेला भला हूँ,किसी के
पास आने से डरता हूँ,
ये किसी का दुआ है या पुनरावृति
नहीं मालूम,
मगर आज वर्षों से मौन पत्ते वैसे ही
फड़फड़ा रहे हैं
पुरानी यादें दिला रहे हैं,
कहीं तुम बहरूपिया तो नहीं,
नहीं नहीं ये वहम है शायद,
प्यार जो करता हूँ,
गुमशुम हूँ पर ठीक हूँ,
मुस्कुराने से डरता हूँ।
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वाह मधुसूदन जी जोरदार, मैं जिस शैली में कविता लिखता हूँ उसको, आपसे बेहतर सटीकता के साथ बहुत कम लोग समझते हैं।
बहुत बहुत आभार। आपकी कविता मुझसे भी श्रेष्ठ है!
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हा –हा….आपकी कविता पढ़ते ही पता नहीं कहां से शब्द आते हैं और पंक्तियाँ बन जाती है।धन्यवाद आपका।आपके पंक्तियों में बेहतरीन भाव है।सुक्रिया आपका।
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☺️☺️👌👌 beautiful
बयार means breeze
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Thanks so much! Yes true 😊
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Can I get an English translation please dear?
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Hi Miss! I think it’s the second time you are asking for it. Thank you for showing interest in my writing. But I don’t know is it worth it or not but since you asked let me try…It goes as
*Sometime some breeze touches me
It feels that you are in camouflage
A gentle smile appears on my face
It seems it’s the result of someone’s grace
When these winds cross me
I feel it must have also blown in the past*
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This is beautiful. I sometimes understand that words sometimes it’s just so poetic that I need help. You write brilliantly well.
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Thanks so much for showing your interest. I am humbled!
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Yeah..maybe.. Sometimes i feel this😛
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Thank you for reading it!
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बहुत खूब लिखा है। 👌👌
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शुक्रिया रजनी जी!
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Something like….. Kal kisne dekha
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Yes!!! 🙂
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Ya
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