
सुनो कि अब तुम हो नहीं कि
~अभय
घर का हर कोना सूना है
सब उत्सव जीवन से गए कि
अब बस, मन ही मन रोना है
Recently attended a marriage ceremony. I was from the bride side. Despite having tremendous work load, I saw the hollowness in the father’s heart and his feeling towards his only daughter. To portray that feeling in words is difficult especially if you haven’t gone through it. I wrote just four lines, hope you would like it!
Miss my sister at home to fight and to care
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Oh Yes! I think the same feeling will be on another side
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Yes 100%
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Remindes me of my sister 💓
Gud one bhai
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Thanks Nimish
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Beautifully written
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Thanks Deepti!
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You felt the pain…nicely exprssed .
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Umm..I don’t know.. Though I tried to.
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Emotional!
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The process is emotional!
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Full of emotions …..wonderful post
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Shukriya Rohit!
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Heart touching emotional!!
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Thanks so much Kranti!
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😊
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कम शब्दों में दिल को छू लिया।खूबसूरत।👌👌
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शुक्रिया मधुसूदन जी, आजकल आप कहां विचरण कर रहे हैं😀
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बस आकाल आ गया है शब्दों का।
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मैं तो भावनाओं के बल पर ही चल रहा हूं भाई, शब्द तो मेरे पास पहले भी थे नहीं, अकाल कभी नहीं पड़ा, बस मैं शब्दों से कंगाल था और हूं भी
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हा हा।जिनके पास भावनाओं में उबाल है उनके पास शब्दों की कंगाली कैसी।हमारी भावनाएं ही सुप्त हो गई है क्योंकि आप जैसे लोग जो सो गए। नतीजा सुखाड़ आ गया शब्दों का।कुछ लिखिए भाई।।।।।।।☺️
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जी मैं आपके इशारों को समझ रहा हूँ! पर मेरी सृजनता भी अब वैसी नहीं रही। विचार में एकरूपता सी आ गयी है। कोशिश करता हूँ भाई!😊
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कोशिशें अक्सर कामयाब होती हैं।🙂
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🙂
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Dekhta hoon aaj kuch andar jhhank ke, shayad kuch bahar aaye 🙂
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Picture and post reminded me of my time
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