Blast From the Past…
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वो रास्ता..
सच्चाईयों से मुँह फेरकर,
मुझपर तुम हँसते गए
दल-दल राह चुनी तुमने,
और गर्त तक धसते गए
खुद पर वश नहीं था तुम्हें ,
गैरों की प्रवाह में बहते गए
जाल बुनी थी मेरे लिए ही,
और खुद ही तुम फँसते गए
नमी सोखकर मेरे ही जमीं की,
गैरों की भूमि पर बरसते रहे
सतरंगी इंद्रधनुष कब खिले गगन में,
उस पल को अब हम तरसते रहे
……….अभय ………..
Beautiful poem . it is weaving of thoughts that flow from your prolific pen like sweet honey.
be blessed always.
Just remember me always
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Thanks so much for your nice words to me! I always find your comment encouraging, though not sure that all your praise are worth of or not!!!
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Always be blessed you deserve praise.
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🙏🙏
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bahut hi khubsurat rachna Bhayee ji……..
थी हमें भरोसा,छोड़ गए,
सच्चाई से मुंह मोड़ गए,
थी राह सजी जो दलदल से,
वे उससे रिश्ता जोड़ गए,
अब कहाँ धरा पर खुशियां हैं,
ना इंद्रधनुष की छटा वहाँ,
हम तरसते हैं यहाँ खड़े,
वे आज तड़पते छोड़ वहाँ,
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Shukriya Bhai shab!!!
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“नमी सोखकर मेरे ही जमीं की,
गैरों की भूमि पर बरसते रहे.” Wow just wow!
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रचना के क्रम में मुझको भी यह पंक्ति बहुत खास लगी थी! शुक्रिया॥
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Haha! Acha
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😊
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Beautiful thoughts in form of poem
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Thanks for appreciation!
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Bahut Khoob…
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Shukriya
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I am new here. I also write Hindi poems. Plz check out my blog.
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Welcome to WordPress! It’s good to know that you write in Hindi. Will pay a visit to your blog ! Keep writing!
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आप करें काव्य-अलंकरण,
मैं कहते न थकूं–“अति सुंदर, अति सुंदर”।
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हा हा! शुक्रिया🙏🙏
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👏👏👏
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😊
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बहुत ही खूबसूरत पंक्तियाँ हैं आपकी। 👌👌👌
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जी शुक्रिया!!!
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I can relate with this very deeply, i had a thought something like this but was unable to express through words and its good that i did not write coz i could not give my thought such a nice presentation like you.
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So nice of you Jyotirmoy! I am humbled. Pleased that you liked it.
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beguiling…👌👌
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Thanks Supriya…
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Nice words
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Shukriya Pratima Ji!!!
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